My name is Ethan. Along time has passed since the last time I've been alive, but I can still remember the things when I was. Especially the day I was Sired. It was a horrible way to do it, nonetheless, a bizarre way, but hey? Who really has a good way, right? At least I died happy! Here's how it went:1
It was my 21st birthday, and I was getting drunk. I was in college and had plenty of girls, but I was attracted to one, who was a little bit on the weird side. Her hair was long and black, and her eyes...oh she had the deepest set of blue eyes. Her smile was almost perfect, with the exception of a lip bray piercing. That's hot, but she didn't need it. Her body was tanned and seemed to have a natural shimmer, her legs were long and slender, her breast just the perfect size. Her ass wasn't too big, but wasn't too little either, so, to me, she was perfect. 2
Well. After hitting the clubs around Midnight, I walked into a Restaurant called Jubbies. It was a small, dank place, but it was cheap, and the best way to not get into a fight when you're drunk, I didn't need it tonight, it was my day. After seating myself, I looked around the area. No one was their really, but a few gentlemen smoking cigars and drinking fast cups of brandy. Then I saw her. She sat alone, in a dark corner with little light, and a pad opened in front of her. Her loose black hair hung to the side and her eyes intent on whatever she was doing. Her elongated hands were holding a pencil and moving fast. Apparently, she wasn't a party girl. SO I decided to check her out.3
I slide out from my table and made my way over to her, ignoring the waitress who came to take my order. When I stopped by her booth, she stopped, what I now knew, drawing and looked at me. Her deep set eyes examined me as I examined her. Both her ears were pierced. Two in the lobs, and Four on the cartilages. Her make-up was dark and spread, as if smudged, and her lashes had fake little diamonds across it. I was wrong, she had been partying. She smiled, half wondering and half interested. 4
"May I help you?" She asked.5
I smiled and took a seat. "Sure. You can help me by telling me your name."6
She raised an eyebrow. "Laina. Why?"7
I stared a bit at her, she was so beautiful. After a few seconds I replied. "I've seen you around, you're in my class in college. I've noticed you from a distance, but this is the only time I've had enough balls to talk to you?"8
Laina laughed. "I see. Booze and hormones. A good way huh?" She looked at me sideways. "What about you?"9
I flushed at the fact she wanted to talk. "Ethan. And the booze is correct, but the hormones..nah..no way."10
She laughed once more. Her laugh was almost perfect, like she was. "I see. Right through a lie."11
"Huh?"12
"Come on. Let's make this a one night stand." Laina grabbed my hand, and led me out the door...13
Author notes
Kindof a typical way things start out I guess. THere's gonna be I think 3 or more parts to this...I'm not sure..
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Lol. Thanks! I appriciate it! Send me a link to your stories! And it's nice to hear from ya again!
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Tawni -
Woah! Tawni the vamp is so sexy! Excellent descriptive writing, girl!
This is a great start to a story and the way you leave it definately begs me to read on! Cant wait for the next installment!
'Her laugh was almost perfect, like she was. "I see. Right through a lie." ' I really love this line - well I actually love it all! I love vampire stories, and I've written a couple of old-fashioned ones but this 'insight' into the modern-world vamps is really naturally done.
Excellent start to a very intriguing story. I'll stay tuned!
Love and hugs!
*~Huntress~*

