Forever - Closer

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Nothing can break the tears
He can take away my fears
I dream of forever coming soon

My hearts sewn to yours
I've lost the threatening corpse
We dream of Forever coming closer
 
: Now letting you into the threat
Means I would have no more love left
I can feel forever growing closer
 
My soul entangled in yours
Ive beaten the threatening clause
We can feel forever growing closer
With this metaphorical ring
Listen to my heart beat sing
I will bring eternity forever closer

On one knee hand raised
Thank the heavens for what you gave
We will bring eternity forever closer

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Author notes

I wrote this for my partner Dan
I love him so much.
<3

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  • Siby Anan
    June 4

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    A beautiful love poem (:
    Only you could manipulate words into such meanings that are subtle, yet powerful.


  • MsAlee gold member
    June 4

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    Completely beautiful. I love the lines
    "My hearts sewn to yours
    I've lost the threatening corpse
    We dream of Forever coming closer"
    Its exactly how i feel about T. Our hearts and souls are sewn together and shall be forever.


  • CeliaBby
    June 1

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    Dan is one lucky feller.. For you to be making this wonderful piece of writting just for him. xD I like that birdy picture.. Nice. Keep up the good work Mirth! I wish someone would kindly write seomthing about me lol.. x)

  • Wow! This is so heartfelt, and I could feel the love. I'm so glad that you have Dan in your life. I think that I have to read more of your work.