Emerald eyes meet onyx eyes
Pale hands meet pink breasts
And pale lips meet light pink lips
This love is forbidden
She knows this
But she cant help...
Bodies move together in perfect sequence
He smiles
She smiles
If they find out they'll think of me as a traitor she thinks
But...I dont care
Noises of pleasure are heard
A whisper is heard
She looks up into the onyx eyes once more
"Scream my name." He repeats.
She obliges.
More moving.
More feeling
More knowing that
She will be a traitor in everyone's eyes if she was caught
More knowing that
If she was with him when it happened
She didn't care.
Author notes
Thinking about Itachi and Sakura...well....doing it. Yes I am a pervert. And yes I am proud of it. XD
Comments
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So young with extrodinary talent, I congratulate you on your work my fellow japanese lover.
I find Itachi to be one of the characters that are hard to bring out into a love/erotic concept but you my friend have pulled it off well.
Each line flowed perfectly into another thus creating a true concept that was not forced in the least, keep up the exellent work!.
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Thanks.
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Woah...
Omg wow you have talent o.o Gratz!beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 4.


