7/23/051
I think I may have a problem. 2
It seems a push people away3
Maybe I don't mean too but I do all the same4
Confusion is a migraine5
For I can't forget6
He did something for me7
No other human did8
He treated me with dignity9
A lover and a friend10
But now that it's over11
I dump guys left and right12
I look for faults in them13
I start the fights14
I keep wondering what would happen15
If I asked him back16
But that half of me is over17
The past is the past18
So do I stay a shadow19
Or return to him who made me live20
I dread to face my actions21
So much I said and did22
For now I'm stuck in limbo23
Love a Meir word24
Until I find the person who can make the spark return25
7/27/0526
I HATE HER! My step mom is such a bitch! I can't please here no matter what I do! Her kids are perfect and I am second rate, She ignores their faults and blames them on me! I guess that's the way it is with step parents their kids are just plain better.27
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I thought your poem conveyed the agony of a lost love. It might help to visualize the right person in your life instead of trying to redo the past.
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All I can say is DAMN. you are good at describing a situation and telling a story.
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thats pretty cool
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omg!
i love it
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I'm glad you added on! I know exactly how that is... in fact, things got so bad, and my mom finally noticed, so now we're out on our own and a lot happier. I hope that things work out for you soon!
Kate
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look I am copying my journal todays wasn't a poem
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This was good... but I'm kind of stuck in a hard place. I understand this was from your journal, but in the rules, I asked for no poems... So do you write only poetry in your journal? It would be easier for me to judge if you were to enter a different entry.
Thank you for entering, though!
Kate
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Wow this was really well written. I loved the "For now I'm stuck in limbo, love a meir word, until I find the person who can make the spark return" Well done indeed. Its absolutely beautiful.
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