Twilight With Me Added In (fanfiction) Chapter 5

All was quiet. The sun was just setting over the horizon, the last rays lighting the land with a golden tone. A twig snapped just to the right of me, turning to look I find a young deer th at had just earned his antlers. My throat burned even more, the acidic vemon pooling in my mouth did nothing but make me want to rip the yound deer apart like a wild animal! I knew that I should be ashamed of these thoughts but my mind was only on one thing and that was to kill. 1

Crouching down I got myself ready. I glanced around quickly to make sure that no one was going after my kill I preparred for my attack. My eyes flashed as I went after my kill. The young deer was down before he even knew what happened. Restraining the deer I snapped it neck to keep it from wailling. Once I was sure the deer was dead I sunk my teeth in to the neck of the young deer. 2

The blood ran down my throat like thick water. Warm and so good! I drank my fill, the ripped the deer up to make it appear as if it was attacked by an animal. I looked around for the others finding that none where near by I started walking back to the house. I never really looked at the woods when I was lost in them before. They were breath taking, the tall pines that seemed to strech for miles above my head, the light that filtered through the tree tops, and the music of nature at it’s best. 3

Before I realized it I found myself back at the house. I never thought that it would be possible to see something so beautiful. I just reached the bottom of the stairs when I felt a prescense, one that wasn’t any of the Cullens. Who would be here? None of the Cullens where back yet, should I take a look? Before I could do anything else I was tackled to the ground. If I were human I would have had the wind knocked out of me. 4

Looking up I found my self face to mussle with a werewolf. 5

Author notes

I'm really sorry that I couldn't make it longer but I just couldn't come up with many ides for this chapter. I hope to update soon, so please enjoy! I rewrote the bio for the character so go to the first chapter and read it!!! Here's the link!

http://storywrite.com/story/278286

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