While boating, coughed, lost my denture1
Chewing now is an adventure.2
As I grew old, thought I'd be raunchy3
Did not happen, just got paunchy.4
On the wrong horse I did bet5
It's been two days, hasn't finished yet.6
Sweet corn drenched in hot melted butter7
Oohs and ahs I loudly mutter.8
That was not a lion's roar9
Was my spouses quiet snore.10
Author notes
Running away on;y wears your shoes out.
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What a delightful read. Keep up the good writing. Your mind is very sharp for your age.
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a really nice story...with beautiful imagery and nice vocabulary used...the background u used fits in well with your story too...nice work and shud i be to intruding to expect more of such amazing works from u in the future....keep in tuch.....it was a mesmerising story...keep writing... stay wel......
~rick~
p.s. i hope u go thru some of my poems and give me some honest feedback about them i really need some honest comments...no flattery please...i'll be hopin to hear from u...............................................................tudlez ta ta ciao
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lol fab I love it! Guess it would be obvious to say some of the rhymes are slightly dodgy!! Funny me like it a lot!
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I love it! Brilliant! I could read a million of these poems! Thanks for the laugh.
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