Texture of a Moment

To un-think what was once the texture of a moment.1

With rapid understanding I saw fit to demand a momentary rebirth. 2

Simple yet too often distracted by rabid details, each with their own degree of entitlement.3

Only reason and sometimes circumstance fosters the effort ...press forward.4

Dripping, monotone, with just a hint of something better the comment came. 5

So obvious to the other, but how to the observer does silence really come to bear? 6

Patience not pain, reflection with due gain. 7

Wait for it. 8

Each more valued then those yet to come. 9

One is impatient, one is more aware..10

clearer..11

composed..12

understood..13

the moment.14

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  • Kevan gold member
    May 27

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    Wow.

    I quite like this. It is thought-provoking and inspiring. I think you will be very famous on this website if you keep up work like this

    Welcome to the site!
    Kevan (Greeter)


  • whoudini
    May 27
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    Very good

    and to the point and simple and short and powerful.