Those confidential tears of ridiculous want1
The adoration of the unpredictable bricks he stacks2
The guiding lights he paints on your confused black sky3
His body of lies you believe 4
The pregnancy of bliss5
The dangerous thumping inside6
Those beats of regret and love7
His happy endings to your nonexistent stories8
His body of lies you believe 9
The natural high he induces 10
The excitement of his touch11
His ability to sink you into a fantasy world12
The protection from reality13
His body of lies you believe 14
The electricity in your system15
That moment he kisses you16
Those stars floating clockwise17
The numb sensation and the blindness he causes 18
His body of lies you believe 19
But that tear of your heart20
The overwhelming ache21
The weighty blame that hits22
The confidential tears of ridiculous need23
When you finally discover the truth 24
Comments
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Beautiful. I love the flow. The way you wrote about an experience that you or someone else had.
Well Done
-Chantale
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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