His Dissappearing & Reappearing Aura

His soul was (later) left behind, after whispers from the outside feildz told him, he could nolonger control his own corspe. His new guidelines were mocked by his own laughter & person-al. From failure to continue the demens & stick to a schedueled future. But pain seeked to regain his life again. (old) shadows followed him. Haunting the new soul he brought back. His fear of repeated dying questioned his sanity. Visions of past tourture manipulated his cry for safety. It excused his need for metal lungs that blocked off expired oxygen that increased his reason for glass veins that only held dried (black) grounds of smoke (ashes).

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I know i probley misspelled some of the words, but i was in a hurry. I'll go back && fix them if you tell which ones they are.

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