A Goth's Love- Ch 2-

"Oh shit. what'd I do this time??" Lisa asked.1

"I'm not sure YOU did anything... how ever i do need to know if there is a Mike Niehoff here?" the police officer said.2

"Why?" Lisa asked snottily3

"Because we need to talk to him." the other police officer said.4

"Why?" Lisa asked again5

"Because we do" the police officer said half annoyed now.6

"why?" Lisa asked.7

"Just tell me IF HE'S HERE!" the police officer8

"OOOOOOOO if that's all you wanted you should have just asked!" Lisa said innocently.9

"is he here?!" the police officer burst out again.10

"why?" Lisa asked again11

"don't try this again." 12

"why?"13

BECAUSE I'LL ARREST YOU!" the police officer said.14

"OOO" Lisa squealed15

"I'll ask you one more time. is-he-here?" he said through clenched teeth.16

"yes. but one more time. seriously now. WHY?"17

*sigh* 'this will be the death of me.'18

"Because we have reason to believe that he's a drug dealer." the female police officer said.19

Author notes

sorry this is so short! i swear to god the next one will be longer.... alot longer... lol

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  • SsshVoices
    July 26, 2005
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    cool i like it ,takes love to know who you want to protect ,thanks and good luck ,don't get caught we need you
    drugs might be the death of alot of artists but its the life of more we never would have heard of without them.

  • ICaughtFire
    July 26, 2005
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    Hrm. A lot better grammer-wise this time . But yes too short Arg. Oh and Why is MY favorite question toooo .
    A few minor corrections and this should be perfect.
    &hearts