Many years ago in the land of Persia, a young prince was born. His father had trained him to be a great warrior, the prince was named Aragon. At the age of 17 the prince was a great warrior and Persia had many victories because of his great skills and power. So his father gave a banquet for his great gift and all of the kingdom joined in to celebrate.1
“My boy, this banquet is for your great power and for all the victories of every war we have been in!” he yelled out to everybody in the great hall.2
Aragon rose his cup of wine to his father “Thanks father just remember that I will always give Persia victory” he smiled as the whole hall cried and clapped in happiness. But he lied he hated all the blood and killing of people he didn’t know but he couldn’t tell this own father. All he wanted is to fall in love with the right girl, he could get any girl he wanted but he wanted only one. As the dinner died down he walked down to the lake he use to go when he was a small boy. He skipped the rocks as the pebble skips on the water, when something caught his eye. She was the most beautiful girl he had seen in his life. Her hair shined in the moonlight, it was white in colour and hid her light baby blue eyes. She saw the Prince and their eyes met.3
“Oh Prince, I am sorry to distract you” her voice rang like bells to him, her perfect smile came across her face and Aragon felt his heart beat faster as she came closer to him making him melt inside.4
“Not at all my fair lady I was the one that distract you” Aragon smiled back at her. The beautiful girl smiled back “My name is Rose-Lee” she winked at him.5
Suddenly music came out of no where in the castle. Aragon looked up to Rose-Lee and grabbed her hand “Can I dance with you?” he smiled at her. Rose-Lee nodded and grabbed his hand as they danced by the lake as the moonlight hit her face the prince wanted her forever and this moment as well.6
As the music died down they both stood to each other, still hold hands and looking to each others eyes, as the prince was about to kiss Rose-Lee, his father called his name out to him “Aragon! where are you?” Aragon turned around “I’m here” he turned back to Rose-less but she disappeared he tried looking for her but he was too late.7
what do you think?
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Question? Where you inspired by the actually character called Aragon or did the idea come from somewhere else.
It was an interesting story. Not one that I would usually read but none the less it kept me reading until the end. I did like the way that it was written and the ending was sweet and sad.
Keep up the great writing.
Thanks for sharing this story.
Blair
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well I thought that Aragon was an good was an good name for an prince and i got the story in my head cause i was playing an game and the character was an prince as well so i say why not make an prince story lol Oh the story is no finish yet XD but thanks ^^ for reading it ^^^
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