Life is full of pain,1
Life is full of regret,2
Sometimes we make mistakes, 3
That we are going to forget.4
Life is a story that needs to be told,5
Every day of it is worth more than gold.6
You shouldn't fear anything that comes your way, 7
Because life is a one time deal,8
That won't forever stay.9
Author notes
It would be great for comments.
A contest entry
- POEMS ONLY! by SilentMoonDance.
150 points, ended June 19, 17 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest - Great Endings(...or just a great story)! by Elms Apprehended.
180 points, ended June 22, 15 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Ther are no questions to be asked
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Beautiful! Very true, and with so few words, too! Great job! The flow is just the slightest bit choppy, I think due to the forced rhymes, but the scheme was lovely. Keep it up!
-Alix -
This is incdredibly awsome! really nice flow, I really enjoyed reading it.I loved the rhimes, it makes it musical....Great Job!
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Very true indeed. Though lifey be filled of pain and regret, it's also filled with pleasent memories and laughs. Your life has your friends and your love ones and they help make life bariable to live in.
This is very beautiful.
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Well written and very true!
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This was very unique. I've never read anything that said so much in so few words. This really captured what you were trying to say. Great job.
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This was nicely done and you made the points in just a few words about life,
and you hit on the main ones so this was nice the way you keeped it short, neat and to the points, really enjoyed this and this was a nice little poem to keep by you in a little note card to , just keep reminding you what you are , who you are and what you should and could be doing . Thanks was great to read.
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Great poem, and so very true - vague yes, but only so much better to see yourself in.
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So INCREDIBLY vague. I wish there were an example or two to illustrate.
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For 50 words, you summed up life pretty well.
Good job, and thanks for entering the contest! -
nice...
I like this poem, the thoughts on life. It speaks of living the best life you can, appreciating each day.
Great job, good luck!
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It was short and to the point. It made beautiful sense and I thought it was pretty good. Good luck in your contests!
-Angel (Lydia May) -
good job
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i thought your poem was really good and was really descriptive i liked it
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thank you for the comment.
ps- i love your work!
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