Broken

I want to see your naked body on the cold floor, writhing in unbearable pain,
screaming your apologies at me, while I laugh my own ass off.
I crave the day I will see your paper arms twist to past their limit,
so far that they are practically rip away from your precious body.
I wish to see your mannequin legs coil around and around and around
twisting until the can never be unwound ever again.
I would love to see your lips yell your profanity as your lips start to fracture,
cracking until they fall off your beautiful face.
I ache to see your starry eyes pop out of your head,
crying the tears you’ve never shed when you were supposed to cry for me.1

I want you to see the tears I bleed from crying so excessively.2

[You’re already so BROKEN, so why won’t you just SHATTER?]3

I want your beautiful porcelain body to stay against me,
filling me with the warmth that fills your entire being.
I crave for you to wrap your glass arms around me,
protecting me from the things that always seem to scare me.
I wish to have your smooth legs sway me,
To do dance me to an unreal melody.
I would love to hear your saccharine lips whisper things to me,
letting me know that my soul will always be free.
I ache to see your sparkling eyes look me in the eye,
letting me know that I’m all you’ll ever need.4

I want you to see how much I need you.5

[I’m already so BROKEN, so why won’t I just SHATTER?]

Author notes

Yeah, I usually don't write things like this.

The house stands on dreary hill
It stands forlorn, austere, and still

(For the Sadism contest: I felt this would better fit.)

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  • Shadow-Kissed
    June 9

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    Nicely Done

    This was eerie and very well written. The words took on meaning of their own. Very well done and thanks for entering.

    -Chantale

    P.S. Thanks for reading the rules

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.

  • WickedElf
    June 7
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    OOH that was good. That was really well done and very spooky and melodic. NICE^^


  • momo1614
    May 25

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    I LOVED IT!!!! it sorta reminds me of mello and near and how mello hates near to the point that he loves him but anyways i'd give a big round of applause and yes it made me feel like something i would defitely want to hear or say to someone i love but also hate

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.


  • Pudding-zilla silver member
    May 23

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    Rawr. haha. this was amazing. I love the things in brackets. good luck

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