Ch3; Swinger Gore

(Previous...we'll have to do it the hard way...)1

Madie began screaming, hands furiously trying to come undone. But it wouldn't work, we know how to tie people. "Madie this will only hurt as much as you allow it too...if you squirm and move it will hurt more" I tired to be as calming as I could pull off, not an easy task when you want to fillet someone with your pride and joy.1 To Jordan I think he felt it was harsh, because he too was screaming as I slide the first knife into her. Her eyes went wide as her skin split around the blade. "Now I'm going to rotate it, that's the only way to have a circular hole." I gripped the hilt harder, twisting the knife, making a nice new hole, bigger than she started with. "There you go, try it now." He plunged his dick into her pussy, it was like fucking a coffee mug filled with blood. Luke-warm and wet, he could hardly contain himself. He pulled at her hips with incredible strength, leaving deep pooling marks on her body. He just couldn't leave it to that, and finish inside of her. He raised up, putting his hand on the back of her neck once again, pushing his blood covered dick towards her. She closed her eyes and turned her lips refusing him. "Listen here sweetheart" his full on Australian accent bellowing "you do this and whatever else I want or I will torture him right before your eyes, starting with cutting his dick off with a razor blade, one painful cut at a time." Jordan screamed again, but this time it was muffled from a gag. Madie opened her eyes wide and fearful. She looked at Jordan tied up with me sitting oh his lap bloody knives in hand. She looked back at Max, stared into his black eyes. Again she closed her eyes but while opening her mouth2

Author notes

1: it might have been a lil oddly written but by pride and joy I mean her favorite weapons, her twin knives...

alright, I know, sick and twisted, but hey some people like it, tune in later for more torture ::evil grin:: OoOoOoOOoOoo

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  • theDARK1
    February 6, 2008

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    yea, i got the weapons as being her 'pride and joy.' just as thought when she said to max that one room wasn't cleaned yet, i figured it had to be blood was still left behind. if one thing, i think you may change the minds of people who wanted to swing to stay happy without doing it! i can almost imagine what happened to that couple in my mind. next day, jordans and madies car is still found at the bar as they become an episode of 'without a trace.' done with a great imagination and will have to give you kudos and turn down offers to a swing club (hehehe), DARK.

  • Agony Creeps
    July 28, 2005
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    I wont leave you be because I'm glad to find someone else twisted who might actually like this stuff, i'm stuck with what to write next but you'll soon have your fun LOL
    ~Agony


  • Porcelain Doll
    July 28, 2005
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    Well, I like it Yeah, I'm twisted. Leave me be Excellent write here! Not what you normally read. Nice change of topic. Thanks for sharing, I look forward to reading the rest.
    ~Amy

  • Silhouetted Angel
    July 23, 2005
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    lol. Yeah that is annoying. And I hope you get out of your writers block soon. While in my computers class the guy sitting next to me saw the title (yeah I was on ap.. the teacher is sooo boring..) and he's like "i don't think I want to know" lol .. I laughed. Look forward to more though

  • Agony Creeps
    July 23, 2005
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    don't worry, it would take a lot ot get on my shit list, you know that, one wolf to another, simple fact don't cross'em! lol
    Sad thing is I have notes written on what else I want to write I'm just stuck in writers block.....grrrr
    Anyway
    ~Laura~
    GRRRRRRRRR I'm so sick of this UPDATE YOUR QUOTE bull-shyte! lol

  • Agony Creeps
    July 23, 2005
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    glad you liked it enough that you want to read more, lol
    yes it is very disturbing thats the whole point, its for the sheer shock and awe value of it all!
    ~Agony

  • Silhouetted Angel
    July 21, 2005
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    Okay.. I read the other two.. and oh my darling... I'm just... Never gonna dwell on your shit list... the things you are coming up with.. just.. ow lol.
    But this is a really good story so far

    ~jessica

  • Lucid4now
    July 21, 2005
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    disturbing

    This is very disturbing!! Great write because I know that's what you wanted. Keep writing so I can keep reading. Write on!!

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