He is My "type" 1
Very cute and quite young2
Curious and very fun3
Inexperienced4
Oh I like that as well5
Think he would be swell6
To play with. 7
We send messages now 8
Thoughts turn to sex somehow9
I know 10
He's never been taken 11
Fantasy leaves Me shaken.12
Inside him13
Tis where I long to be14
Does he think such of Me?15
Am I just 16
A moment here and there online? 17
What does he do with his time?18
Does he care?19
And why 20
Oh why21
Do I? 22
Author notes
He knows who he is. 
Comments
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Very Good.
Loved it. Haven't heard much Gay Poetry, but I think yours was really good. I loved the lines "He's never been taken . . Fantasy leaves Me shaken". Great.
beginning: 4, language: 4, plot: 4, ending: 4, dialog: 4, characters: 4.
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ahhhhh...good!
The last line is the best, I find your poetry flows so well, love reading it, very sensual.
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Oh, I'm sure he cares .. Besides, who out there can resist dedicated poetry? I know I can't
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*giggles* tis a lucky, lucky lad that i am not jealous of him. For i know Your heart tis mine first and foremost.
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