I realized how hard life truly is...
Do I push or just forgive?
Do I leave or just pretend?
All the words are tainted lies...
All feelings questioned...
All moments rehearsed...
Til I die, I will feel this pain,
Til I die, I will live with this guilt.
One life lived wrong...
No eraser, no rewind...
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I used creative punctuation...on purpose
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Great job I noticed the punctuation. Very interesting and very easy to relate to. I loved the last line No eraser, no rewind
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I love this. I feel like life is a stage with no rehearsals or re-takes. I do feel guilty a lot, for various reasons. Brilliant work.
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