trapped part four 0_o

you open the door to find Olivia standing there looking at the ground.1

"________ you have a.....guest"she mumbles before turning and walking away. A few minutes later a man walked into the doorway. He looked almost like Paul except older and he had darker hair and blue eyes. You couldn't see any way wings but he could be hiding them like Paul was.2

"ah so your Paul's new pet" the man hissed 3

"what" you look at him confused 4

"such a pretty girl" the man smiled reaching out to touch your face.5

"don't touch her"6

you look past the man to see Paul standing behind him looking angry.7

" don't touch her" Paul repeats.8

"what ever" the man puts down his hand and rolls his eyes "i don't have time for this"9

Before he leaves the man turns around and smiles to you10

"until next time"11

After he was gone you sit down on your bed and look at Paul confused.12

"who was that?" you ask13

Paul sighs and replies "my older brother....James, I'm sorry if he scared you sometimes he can be that way but he used to be....normal" Paul sighs again and looks over to you.14

" i was a little scared but nothing long term" you smile.15

Remembering the presents, you walk over to the desk and pick up the rose.16

" thank you for the gifts" you smile 17

"you don't have to than........your welcome" Paul replies 18

You walk over to where he is and gently kiss him on the cheek, making his face go red.19

" i better go i still have work to do" he smiles and turns to leave.20

As he's walking away you notice saw dust on his shirt. You sigh dreamily and stop wondering about when you'll get home and start thinking about what you'll do tomorrow. 21

You sit down at the desk and cross out every thing you had written before and now simply put::22

Paul is great and i love it here. Olivia is quite and James 23

worries me a bit but that's OK.I can't wait till tomorrow 24

You change into your night gown and run your finger across the crystals. After a day  of excitement you lay down to go to sleep not knowing what tomorrow will bring.25

Author notes

well i got enough messages asking for part four that i finally typed it up lol well hope u like it comments are appriciated

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  • Angel Of Elements
    July 27, 2005
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    Freaky......and yes it took me that long. If you were obssesed with Fan fiction's then you wouldn't be on allpoerty for like ever. I go on it sometimes. every noe and then. OH and I'm starting my new stroy.hehehehehehe

  • Brokenangels
    July 26, 2005
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    haha i toke that long? lol well you and any body else who reads my story is pauls "pet" as james so rudly puts it lol i acctualy now people named paul and james that look similar thats the funny part

  • Angel Of Elements
    July 26, 2005
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    I'm a pet? I don't want to be a pet. I was so confused when I first read part four because I couldn't remember anything that happened in the othe rparts. LOL now I know !