Love At First Sight

The day was sweltering, to put it lightly. A typical day in the middle of July, with hot days and cool night. The type of days they used to write songs about in musics golden ages, where a man would work eight hours in the blistering heat and then go out to the beach in the cool night air to party and play.1

It was about noon, 12:07 to be precise, and He was heading out on His lunch break, wishing He would have parked closer, when a refreshing cool breeze made Him stop in His tracks. He took a deep breath, savoring the moment, as He closed His eyes and turned to face the wind.2

Opening His eyes as the burst died down, He saw Her, and He lost His breath. Quickly, She disappeared into the crowded streets, and He turned to see that He was at His car.3

~ ~To Be Continued...~ ~4

Author notes

PrePrePrePrequil to Saftey...After that I started thinking about the charicters I used and thought about this...Whaddya think?

What did you think? Please comment!

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    : Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have 0. (?) (Line numbers)
    Ratings:

Comments

1 - 9 of 9
  • ElevateEmotion
    January 20, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    I've read quite a few of these without posting but i'll post, its not often i get the desire to read more than 2 entries from the same author that i like.. keep it up, you're good at it.

  • Lost In Isolation
    November 9, 2005
    Edit | Reply
    awww i wuv it, its totally cool, it so cool and makes me yearn for love wjich is sad because my heart is isolating itself, pusing all love thta comes near away god i hate this not your poem but its great sarah keep writing u have loads of talent
    wuv ya


  • Kyleen
    October 24, 2005
    Edit | Reply
    What!? Why in the world would you write this much and stop? You are very strange in your writings indeed. The whole thing about the "music's golden age" yah, that was sweet. Good job on this.

  • I Hope You Choke
    September 21, 2005
    Edit | Reply
    cool cool... i'm off to read more ^_^


  • XWingsOfSilverX
    September 5, 2005
    Edit | Reply
    This is great too! Now I understand the other one a little better. You've got a pretty good handle on writting short love stories. Keep writting!
    ~Amanda


  • unheardwisdom
    September 5, 2005
    Edit | Reply
    Cute and sweet, like it...


  • September 4, 2005
    Edit | Reply

    Excellent

    very sweet i like alot

  • HopelessScribbles
    September 4, 2005
    Edit | Reply
    hey I want the ending!! lol

  • Laylay
    July 20, 2005
    Edit | Reply

    yyyyyyyyyyeeeeessssss

    aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
    aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
    aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
    wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
    wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
    Much luv to ya aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
    wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

1 - 9 of 9