Project Atlantis Episode 0 : The murder scene

Project Atlantis is about the cit of Atlantis, an under water colony in the year 5405. For 30 years after it's sucess people started to inhabit it and it expanded the sheild around the city stops all water from getting in. The city's water supply is purrifed sea water sucked in by special pipes and then processed through a water plant this also supplies the city with salt. This Episode is to introduce the main character and the main Villan and someone extra. There is a Gaint tower in the middle of the city called 'The Spire' it is owned by a buisness called Atlant-tech.1

There was a crowd gathered around a murder scene outside Atlan-Tech the officers examined the body and the detectives tryed to find any clues. Max, A trainee officer always had a keen eye and could spot even the smallest of differences he was alos an expert of seeing things at the edge of his sigh and he had sort of a sixth sense he could almost feel if something was wrong. Max walked up to the body and said "Doesn't it seem odd that he was thrown out of a window? I mean the windows are extremely strong even a bomb couldn't break it". The sargent gave him a slight push and said "Rookie sometimes you'll see things that aren't possible like the time I saw 2 seperate bodies who had no relation to eachother have the same D.N.A and it is impossible to clone humans our genetic structres are to complex to clone, the two victims weren't related if you're going to say".2

Max felt weird and looked up at the window and saw a shadow at the Window where the victim was thrown from. Max quickly barged through everyone and took the warp pad to the office the door was locked from the outside and noone could have gotten in through there. Max unlocked the door and there was a shadow it looked like it was made of flesh and other organic parts. It roared and jumped at the wall and went straight through thats how it got in but why would it stay there? Max took a look around he could hear a machine running he took out his gun and a Machine jumped out and snatched it and pointed it at him and it threw it on the ground and jumped out building and landed behind the crowd they saw it and they gasped in horror. Max took out a pill and ate it and jumped out after it he hit the ground and said "Sarge I took one of my pills expect me back in a few minutes and bleeding". He ran after the Machine at amazing speed he takled it as soon as he caught up to it. It fought back yelling "I have to kill it I will avenge him"! Max held it's arms down and said "Look I don't want to hurt you but I will shut you down If you don't tell me what the hells going on"! The machine calmed down and said "I have to Kill it...the Beta Human! I have to destroy it"! 3

Max heard about an old project called the Beta human, a project to make artifical humans with abilities that defies nature it self but it was stopped due to human experiments and needless slaughter. "What do you mean Beta Human? The project was stopped years ago"! 4

"My father started it again with only the remnants of the project he designed me to destroy it if it got out of control". Max let the machine go and said "I'm Max". The machine sat up and said "Danny". Max started to bleed through an old scar on his back he stood up and said "COme with me...before...I pass out from the release pill..." Danny quickly grabbed Max and thre him on his back and quickly ran towards the crowd. He quickly hit 20Km per hour and he soon reached the crowd in a few minutes. danny placed Max infront of the crowd Max had lost alot of blood and Sarge ran to Max and said "Rookie!...Rookie!...Machine...thanks". Danny nodded and smilled and jumped up on to a building and jumped away from the scene. Max looked up and said "See you at work in a while Sarge...". Max closed his eyes and the after effects of the pills came into effect to heal the scar, Max would be in a 3 week coma.5

*That night*6

The creature was on the roof top on a building in the slums and he spoke to himself "So my little brother wants to Kill me...Pathetic...I will destroy this miserable city and rise to the surface and be the supreme ruler of the earth"! The creature Laughed evily and said "I am the Beta Human"! it changed form into a Man with and a gleam of red shined in his eyes and he jummped away into lower Atlantis.

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