We wonder at tentative specklings of logical precepts. Yet, we push labyrinthine thoughts away and slip through existence with glaikery. Ignorant mules, we, the youth of the present! How can our eyes be misted over to the decripitation of our sight? How do we not have the foresight to know that it is our dormancy that is slaughtering our commonwealth? The malicious ways of our generation irks me to no end! Put off this heavy idleness you slacking jejunity! You supply a deficient savor to my mouth. Bile ascends my maw. Go, get out, you base deserter of all things reputible and sound!
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- The Power of Words. by Neomaxizoondweebie.
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This is a great utilization of words and you definitely put them into good use. You bring an awful truth to the forefront of the reader's mind--how the youth is severely lacking. I could practically feel the waves of loathing coming from the computer screen. Your rhetorical questions are well placed, and you weren't afraid to use a few exclamation points. Very nice!
However, some words I was puzzled over. What does "glaikery" and decripitation" mean? I looked 'em up but I didn't find any results. So that made me curious.
Also, you had a few misspelled words in there too. They were distracting, but hey, it happens to the best of us.
"We wonder at tenitive (tentative) specklings of logical precepts. Yet, we push labyrinthine thoughts away and slip through exsistance (existence) with glaikery.
The malicious ways of our generation irks me to no end! Put off this heavy idleness you slacking jejunity (great word)! You supply a deficiant (deficient) savor to my mouth. Bile assends (ascends) my maw. Go, get out, you base deserter of all things reputible and sound!"
Other than those words, great little rant you have here! Good luck!
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Thanks for the comment. Yeah I had to get off line really fast (my mom) so I didn't have time to spell check. Glaikery is foolish conduct and decripitation is a rotting away. I'll go fix my spelling errors
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