The stillness of a night sky.1
The silence in a dark room.2
The mournful cry of the crow.3
When the beauty of a void provokes thought of unimaginable things.4
The unawareness of time.5
To be in utter peace.6
To mourn the death and celebrate the life. 7
Stark black.8
Author notes
Short and simple.
A contest entry
- Colour My World by Violette.
150 points, ended May 23, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
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wow great
i love it
short but u get it -
Oh wow, great description, definately worthy of a finalists list. Thankyou so much for entering.
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Thank you!
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It's short, but the words are very powerful and are equivalent to a long poem. I love how you just have short sentences. Stops. Then at the end you say Stark Black and that's what really gives the poem its meaning. It's great!
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thank you
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