Escape to Amnity:Ch.7

The bickering, there was so much of it tossed between Eli and me. I couldn't take it anymore. "You know what? Instead of fussing at me, ask Seth himself!" I said. We turned around, and he wasn't there. "Seth?" We called. We looked for him, but he wasn't anywhere to be found. While standing in confusion, there was another knock on the door. I opened it. It was Seth. "Hello, is Eli here?" he asked.1

"Seth, what are you doing? "I asked. 2

"How do you know my name?"3

"Don't act dumb, you were just here. Eli had just bust in when you began to kiss me."4

"Okay, um, no I was never here today and, no offense, I would never do that to someone I just met."5

"Seth, don't lie," Eli said.6

"I'm not! I haven't been here for weeks and thought it best to come today." His eyes couldn't hide the fact that he was telling the truth. I even confirmed it.7

"Eli, hes not lying," I said.8

"Then who was here?" she asked.9

"I don't know."10

"What's going on? Has that much happened since I was last here," the real Seth said.11

"I don't know if you want to know," I said.12

"No," said Eli. "He should. I think he's part of this now." We all sat down and told him the tale. Within the story, Eli added many "I'm so sorry Amy"s. 13

"There's no way I'm in this thing," Seth said.14

"What, you don't believe us?" I asked.15

"No, I believe you two are the saviors, but I don't see why I'm in this. Does fate hate me that much?"16

"Who knows, but just don't run off like Eli did," I begged.17

"Yeah, I don't know why I did that. It occured to me while I was away, that it made no since as to leave. Actually, I'm rather glad to be a savior. I normally would've been like that earlier, but I guess I was rought with shock."18

Seth headed home and Eli let me stay at her house. I had a crazy dream that alliuded me for days:19

I was walking in a forest, just like the one I walked through the day I arrived at this world. Up in the trees, I saw a woman who was gorgeous. She had blonde hair that stopped a little bit past the shoulders. The dress she was clothed in was that of a light green. She dropped down from the tree right by me without acknowledgement. She walked on and I followed her. We came to the shore I first appeared on. There, she placed the weapons I had found. She turned around quickly, to quick for me to react, and walked right through me. She walked back to the forest and turned into, what looked like, a puma. She climded up a tree, right before I walked by that tree. I saw myself in the blue dress I had, looking around carelessly. The she-puma let out a weird noise, idetical to the one I heard originally. I saw myself run back to the shore. The puma became woman again and leaped down from the tree gracefully. She continued on to the town. Then, all of a sudden, I was in Eli's house and the day that just passed occured. I met SEth, saw fuming Eli, everything excatly. 20

I awoke, unsure of what the whole thing meant. I refused to tell Elli, unsure that she would run off again.21

Author notes

My friend pointed out what I thought, the last chapter moved a bit too fast. So, hope this slows it down a bit!

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  • Psht, now I'm a bit confused. Who the Feilds of Ashodel was that guy?!