bird of a feather part 1

there he was staring into my eyes fangs gleaming in the moonlight ready to bite into my flesh turning me into an immortal. with quick thinking i spread my wings ready to fly into the starlit sky then he lunged at me ready to bite into my neck injecting his blood into my neck i sprung up into the night sky with my angelic wings lighting up the air then flying at a high speed he chased me away from the densely populated city running from the black figure chasing me. finally he had caught me we were engaged in combat talon to claw one us could rip each other apart with a swipe of our hands . i couldn't go on much longer then there was a sharp pain in my right face he had got me . i spiraled toward the ground wings unfurled but i hadn't hit the ground i had been saved but by who when i opened my eyes looking into his purple eyes but we weren't out side any more we were in a cave then setting me down he bit into my neck turning me into an immortal giving me an endless life the last thing i had seen before i had dosed of was the face of an angel . she was staring back at me eyes gleaming at me wings out spread had carried me out of the cave and into the night sky.after about 2 hours of flying we touched down on a tree stump giving me a bowl with a hot soup i had drank it and then fell asleep

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i will make part two soon

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