By me sixteenth birthday, alot had changed. Over the past months, Kit had become distant. Not walking with me. Or sitting with me at lunch. It was like it was before he came, sad and lonley. He hadn't changed at all, it must have been me.1
I was thinknig about it one day on the way home from sixthform. Whern i heart the pounding of somebodys trainers coming up behind me. after a minute they stopped. And i heard th soft voice i once knew so well whisper;2
"Lexxi?"3
i clenched my fists, trying so hard to to punch him right then. i wavered onto my hells and spunround.4
"WHAT?! what do you want from me Kit?"5
Suddenly he ran upt me grabbed my wrists, and kissed me. 6
"I-Love-You"
Sorry kinda short and crappy, i need a new storyline anyone help please?
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okay the starting in chapter one was good, but how does it get from him laughing at her pj and them two not talking. the stroyline is how and why they don't talk no more and what happened when he visited her. otherwise its a good skeleton.
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