Safty

“I came as soon as I could get away. Is She okay?” He asked as The Attendant as He was lead to down a musty hallway silently. No response. No nod, nothing.  No way to know that He’d be heard as The Attendant lead Him to Her room. Without even  so much as a squeak of the hinges The Attendant opened Her room and stepped aside so let Him in, closing the door behind Him with a light clank.1

Searching the area He discovered Her sitting, naked and wet, shivering in the corner of the cold, dark room. Slowly He approached Her, stopping a few feet away. He sat across from Her, looking straight into Her deep, void eyes. Eyes that had once sparkled from laughter, now only stared with pain.2

“Come here, Darling.” He cooed to her lovingly. His eyes were soft, His voice filled with genuine concern as she continued staring blankly ahead. “Baby, I know you just want to stay in that corner forever, knowing your back is pressed up against two walls where no one can hurt you again. But I’m begging you, come sit with me, let me hold you, protect you, make you feel safe in my arms.” Nothing. Silence.3

Ready to for fit He looked down, placing his hands on the ground, pushing to stand, He heard the sound of flesh against flesh as He looked up to see Her on Her hands and knees, crawling towards Him, still staring blankly ahead as she crawled into his lap. While She gently lay Her head against His chest He wrapped His arms tenderly around Her, holding Her tightly as He kissed the top of Her head.4

After sitting there together, in the middle of the dank room, She lifted Her head to His and gently kissed Him, pulling Him even closer, as He ran His hand slowly down her shoulder to lace their fingers together.5

With Her other hand She ran Her hand up and down His chest under His shirt, gently letting Her long nails drag, making the hairs on His back stand at attention and the muscles in His thighs twitch. 6

Breaking the kiss, He unbuttoned His shirt and through it to the side as he placed a gentle trail of kisses down Her neck to Her chest. Genially He laid Her on the cold tile of the room as He kissed His way down Her knees and up again, stopping to lightly flick His tongue against Her awaiting clit.7

She squirmed in pleasure at the first pass of His tongue against Her clit, and quietly moaned as He slid it in and out of her,  lapping at Her sex like a dog at it’s water bowl, and moments later Her body was shaking as She came.8

He drank all of Her as she orgasmed, then slid off His pants and boxers before crawling on Her body.  Stroking Her hair, He looked straight into her blank eyes and he slowly slid into Her. Feeling Her muscles contort to fit Him, He kissed Her as He pumped harder and faster, only breaking the kiss to gently whisper “I love you” into Her ear before He spilled His seed deep inside of Her cavern.9

Moments later, with His back up against the wall, She returned to His embrace as He gently reassured Her.10

He held Her there that night until she fell into a deep, peaceful slumber, and when The Attendant came in the next morning they were still there, and She finally felt safe.11

Author notes

Yeah...I was kinda depressed and horny...Damn my day dreams...Er...Awake night dreams?...And I didn't discribe the charicters or give them names...(That's why He...She...His...Her...Him...Ect...Are capitalized)...So that it would be like this could be anyone...And i realzie it's a little rough...But having so little experiance not only do I not really know what I would do in that situation very well...But I don't quite have the gift to put it into words...Any suggestions would be wonderful...Well...Anyways...Enjoy...And tell me what you think...

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  • I Hope You Choke
    September 18, 2005
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    shmexy i liked it, and now i am off to read more of yours!

  • Brokenpen
    September 3, 2005
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    great job

    hey this was very good. i liked it.. i like d the ending alot to finally feeling safe .. great job... a really hot write. wasn't expecting it to be this hot but .. great job..

  • Atari-Wagon
    July 21, 2005
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    This was interesting I am curious to find out why there was a naked girl in a "dank room"?


  • Ryan gold member
    July 20, 2005
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    I take this sexy read and bite it into submission!!! > <

    ~Ryan~

  • Emo Muffin
    July 20, 2005
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    Very nice, i liked it i think you did a pretty good job writing this, i like the feel of this its a differnt setting then most of this type of writing.
    well great write
    Linds


  • Twisteddolly
    July 18, 2005
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    I Liked it , but throughout the story I wanted to know why she was like that...thats Kinda weird for me. I usually like stories that go right to the point of the "doing" lol. Maybe its just my mood. it was an easy piece to read with the flow of it.

    Jessica


  • The Broken One
    July 18, 2005
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    at first, I thought it was me...and then I heard the long fingernails part I want to fix the spelling/grammar mistakes....they bother me ...but ironically enough...I was talking to Kees just this morning about how I always sleep with my back pressed against the wall...curled into the fetal position and I have to be facing the door...just to protecr myself from...well my mom basically...and others anywho...last night I forced myself to keep my back to the door...faced the wall...I cried so hard...I knew I was safe but I felt like all my demons were behind me laughing at me just waiting for me to fail...and then...I turned onto my back and did fail...I can't sleep without facing the door

    Jayme

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