Mother

My own my best friend1

Is my own mother2

Because of how sweet3

How a wonderful she is4

Of course, she needs to be5

But sometimes she is different6

From any other mom7

With her kindness8

And your eyes that tell all9

You would know that somethings there10

Special about her11

And I'm blessed to have a mom12

Like her13

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  • TheCrimsonPetal
    July 20, 2005
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    You are truly blessed...and you're mom is pretty lucky to have you too

  • meena krish
    July 18, 2005
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    A sweet and loving write for your mother..very nice. Take care~

  • Silver Kitsune
    July 18, 2005
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    Love It

    awww this is sooo sweet! I love it and I think alot of people can realte to this but sadly I'm not but that's alright It's good to know that other's best friends is their mom keep on writing and much love Mina

  • Dragon-flyer
    July 18, 2005
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    Exellent

    Awesome poem Your mom really deserves this poem!


  • carmel apple
    July 17, 2005
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    You love your mom. This is so sweet. Lovely write.

  • ANGELwithoutWINGS14
    July 17, 2005
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    awww thats so sweet and such a great write!!

  • Touched by an Angel
    July 17, 2005
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    Thanks!

    I just added some more things Thank you for reading! Very appreciated

  • cayleyxox
    July 17, 2005
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    awe htis is such a great write for your mom. i wish i could bet along with my mom that wall. n-ways awesome.

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