Plest II

Julie was her name. The mother of his child. They lived five glorious years years that now she was no doubt spending with some other man. You see that was the other thing women not only were one to one hundred but they outlived men by living for three times as long as they did and had a reproductive capacity for fifty years. At nights he sat and remembered the love they shared as he counted down to the end, He could not forget her smile or his son Rukhr or trouble. 1

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  • Marissa Ann Scott
    July 23, 2005
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    Mooooooooore!

    Snuck this one by me!
    Nice song on your author's page. (one of my favourites!)

    Women do outlive me. You took the figures and wrote something interesting! The first line, "Julia was her name" sets a nice tone of reminscence. It made me smiled... mellowed me into a mood to listen to a good story. And that is not an easy thing to do lol!

    Moooooooooore!

    gypsybelle.