Little Audiva sat in the corridor hiding.1
As she saw the evil sorcerer slashing through the air with his wand.2
Stephen McGregory was the name of the dark sorcerer,3
but he was referred to as The Omnipresence.4
The Omnipresence cackled as he looked through his crystal orb. He saw everything and murdered anyone who had done wrong to him. Killing was his game, and predator was his name! Well, his other nickname!5
Audiva was breathing heavily. She could no longer hold her shallow breaths in, that were now as heavy as wind gusts in a storm. The evil sorcerer saw the little brunette through his crystal orb and quickly shook his magic eight ball to see if he should go after her. In the eyes of the mystery, the answer was unveiled. It said, "Definitely!"6
Stephen wrapped his cloak around his body, and grasped his wand tightly. He ran out the door, with his robes following behind. He bit his lip, but loved the taste of the blood, so it didn't bother him. The blood left a trail down his chin and neck. He must not care, he was in pursuit of Audiva.7
Audiva ran as quietly as possible, but her footsteps echoed through the corridor. The stone floor was soaked in water. There was an intersection, so the girl thought quickly. She took off a scarf and threw it in the direction that she would not be running, and ran like crazy. She was not the fastest girl in her school for nothing! Breathing heavily, well, she only did that because she was scared.8
She learned what she did while she was escaping, just as you learn more about her as you read. 9
Back to The Omnipresence. Well, he tricked Audiva too! He flew on his broomstick at one hundred miles per hour. He knew she wouldn't hear him, and that he could track her easily. This is how these two collided!10
Audiva was still running, and the sorcerer's broom lost it's brake system. It wouldn't stop, so he ran into a wall, and fell on the girl.11
They were in an awkward position, when the girl asked, "are you going to get up now? You are squishing my leg!" He responded by saying, "Oh my gosh! I am so sorry! I just wanted to meet you!" He kept rambling on. He gave some heartfelt statements, and you could tell that something was going on.12
The evil sorcerer that had tortured and murdered many people, was turning into a kind person. He was in love with Audiva. Her wavy brown hair was flowing and glowing in his eyes! His jaw dropped and the once scared girl, gave him a kiss. 13
Just now did she realize that he had pitch black hair. She thought that it looked hot, and couldn't believe that such a personality was hidden! He was so charming, yet she once feared such a darling man for so long! 14
Well, it was cold in the corridors of the dungeon, so the new couple went back into the chambers of The Omnipresence. He lit a fire and they sat in front of it, eating popcorn and watching a stew smoke in the cauldron!15
The brilliant brunette scooted closer to her boyfriend and kissed him with her rosy, red lips. She then whispered into Stephen's ear, "I will love you forever. You showed me that the cursed people can have blessings!"16
Stay tuned for the next chapter of Cursed with Blessings!17
What did you think? Please comment!
Comments
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possibilities
This has possibilities. A rewrite.... stretching.... nip and tuck. It's easy to follow.
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I cant decide if I like it or not either but I like how descriptive it is, not much of a poem tho..but its good...lookin forward to chapter 2
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Great
This is a very unique and different poem, I like it. Keep up the good work and I know I'll enjoy reading more. -
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really passionate and descriptive -
I dont know...If I like it or not...
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Hmm. Very abrupt. I can't decide if I like it right now or not. I'll read it a few more times, and I'll definately look out for part two. Just keep writing!
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