Hope

Irresistible to the ignorant,1

Essential to the desperate,2

It can be your salvation,3

It can be your destruction.4

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A beacon of light,6

Shining in the darkness,7

It can show you the way,8

It can blind your pathway.9

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Addictive to dreamers,11

The heroine of believers,12

You can fly with it,13

You can die with it.14

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Ensnaring your soul,16

It can strangle you,17

Hard and cold,18

It can abandon you.19

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Only those with strength,21

Can endure its deceit,22

Fallen and broken,23

Unfortunately, I am weak.24

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  • wow

    awesome, I really liked it. the first lines are my favorites I think, and 11-14, too...actually almost every line is wonderful, 8 and 9...so so, and I've racked my brain for suggestions, which I couldn't come up with, so just ignore me if you want.


  • BigSouth
    May 11
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    ^_^ love it!

  • i like it its really good

  • Unfortunately, I am weak... haha I like it.