I can't let go

I guess I'm not willing to let you go,1

I've buried my feelings,2

I've lost all that you know,3

You tell me to go on,4

To remember to laugh,5

But I feel broken, 6

I can't let go of the past,7

You didn't deserve all that you got,8

I miss you so much,9

I love you more than you know,10

You are worth the fuss,11

I am so happy that I met you,12

I promise to never ever forget you.13

Author notes

Writers block has taken over me *gah*

I miss you Ty and hope that you are in a better place.

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  • Rose Hathaway
    July 3

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    How close were you and Ty? I feel sorry that I didn't get a chance to know him as well as some others did. A beautiful poem. Ty would have loved it and given you lots of clappies. He would have also joked about you missing him so much. So heres some clappies from Ty.


  • carlisle-cullen-fan
    May 24
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    awww thats a really good poem hun


  • Rorshach gold member
    May 11
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    kid

    let go of the bad boyfriend


    • Toxic Valentine
      May 12

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      I think you interpreted it wrong. He passed away and he told me to not be sad about it, just smile at the memories.


      • Rorshach gold member
        May 12
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        Death and the break up of a relationship are the same emotion for people who do this kind of thing.


        • Toxic Valentine
          May 12
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          I think I would feel better if he had just broke up with me instead. That way I would know that he is ok.


  • Dead Beauty
    May 11
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    What a sad poem... but it is a beautiful one.

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