My Best Friend

My life I have given to you,1

You have made my dreams come true.2

The love of my life,3

My best friend4

My love for you will never end.5

The only man that has given me respect,6

Upon our life I do reflect7

You have given me so much happiness8

You have made me live.9

With a baby on the way,10

By my side you stay.11

I love you so much,12

Every single touch is so special.13

What would I be without you here?14

My best friend is one so dear.15

I give to you my everything16

I know that you will not use or abuse me.17

I am so grateful for the love18

We have shared,19

Caring, passionate20

We talk about the secret things21

Sharing life with all it brings.22

My best friend,23

Always here,24

My best friend,25

I love you dear.26

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  • skitza
    July 17, 2005
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    Awww I loved this poem.. even though I can't relate. I'm happy that you're happy so all is good.
    'My best friend,
    Always here,
    My best friend,
    I love you dear.'
    How's everything going with the baby and that? You feelings better now?
    skitza

  • The Existentialist
    July 17, 2005
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    omg, this was wonderful. i luv it, great job. this would make a REALLY good song. i loved how you made it rhyme and all. keep writing.
    //rocker 4ever//
    rock&metal the mucis of the past present and future


  • eternalpoet
    July 17, 2005
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    4 Stars ****

    my case of best friend is lil drastic

    when i was small.. i made a best friend.. but then we had to move to different place.. .. so .. after we shifted .. we hardly ever met, i wonder if i wil even recognise his face now today.. .. though i remember this name

    than in the new place i made another cool friend.. just perfect like my type.. infact one step ahead in everything.. .. and we were wuit good together.. untill he had to move to USA... now thats terrible..
    laters i decide rather not to make a best friend.. though friends are always fine.. but no more best friend.. and so.. if now asked who is my best friend.. i simply say its me .. may be just waiting for that me to leave me too..

    nice write lady..

    thanks for sharing.. ( i read it too late it seeems though )
    hugs and kisses

    gives choco

    take cares and have a nice time my dear friend........... just keep it up........... your humble little friend....... ............. ............... ........... - vic ( who else? )
    Edited on Jul 17, 7:49 because 'hugs and kisses'.

  • pattyann4500
    July 17, 2005
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    This is lovely. It's such a precious relationship when our partners are our best friends. Beautifully written. Hugs, Patricia


  • Co-Co-Cola
    July 16, 2005
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    Aww! This is so sweet! I wish MY best friend did that for me! .: Glares angrily at her :. she knows who she is....


  • Sharon Corr gold member
    July 16, 2005
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    Brilliance TRUE GOLD I love you.


    My beloved new old friend Mickie27
    A wonderful song of praise from heaven
    Your love for your husband is pure
    And I can surely feel your heart

    You’ve been given the greatest gift of all
    A lover and a best friend
    Whom you will travel with forever
    On a journey of love that never ends

    I am delighted for you and your husband with a new baby on the way
    Rejoicing in all your happiness and love in today
    Sing your songs of glory and love all your life long

    What could be more beautiful from the heart of you
    Then to sing “You have made my dreams come true.”
    Love blooms in your life for you honour your “best friend” in beauty
    Who makes all your dreams come true.

    Namaste Blessed Be, your love is soaring free
    And I’m waiting to hear your songs about the new baby
    That is on the way… Happiness and Joy to you and yours always,
    You friend in spirit your friend in truth, AngelEyes711.

    PS. I love the background of a thousand hearts soaring free.
    Beautifully penned from your heart of pure liquid love and passion!

  • Samplette
    July 16, 2005
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    The love of your live and best friend...what a gift that is. Beautifully written. I hope you are doing well lil' mama....thank you for your prayers and friendship.
    This is a wonderful write..best wishes in the contest.

    Sam

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