Avatar the movie part 1

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Avatar the last air bender1

The movie 2

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It has been 6 months since the death of Avatar Aang. Now the world is at peace. He was killed by poison by Ozai. When he drank the poison he died. He has just had a child named AAngus. AAngus looks a bit like AAng, but he looks like Katara in a way. He has the same skin as Katara. He is a air bender too, but he can do some water bending. Katara is still alive, but she is growing old. She is about 60 years old. She has had strokes every since Aang died. Zuko has been helping her ever since Aang's death. Zuko has also had a great effect since Aang's death. Zuko still will always know that Aang had to die a new Avatar would soon be born. Zuko had to make preparations. Zuko and Aang has already reformed the nations. Sadly it had been the end of the air nomads. Sora, Boka, all air nomads are dead now. It was a tough reform with the lighting king keep going after them. It was was a struggle for reformation he still remember how Aang slathered the lighting king. Aang had faced his fear of death. Today he fights for Katara's well being. It has been rough for Sokka too. He lost his son in a avalanche in the the rocky Americas. Suki is still with Sokka, but she is growing in age. She is 49. Suki now works at gymnastics class. Zuko has grown to be a strong powerful Fire lord. 4

Chapter 1- The early world5

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"Zuko!!" Katara yelled. "I need your help to get some medicine." Zuko had some maids cleaning the palace why he was looking at the land as people traded money and belongings to get food, homes, and other supply. He looked at the land, so peaceful yet he still thought about the past, for when there was war it was rocky and stumpy so instead he thinks of these happy days, but still the past of his friend Aang haunts his every thought, so quickly he moved to see Katara. He opened the door slowly, yet with fast paste he moved to her. "Katara, what did you need?" Zuko replied to her softly. Katara pointed to the cabinet. Zuko understood what she meant, so he opened the cabinet and took out a medicine box that say "Water Tab" in big blue words, and then he ask her to open her mouth, and then he took out the tablet, which was blue with sparkles, and finally threw them in he mouth. Zuko finally left. "Good day Katara!" Zuko says nicely. Zuko then goes to his room to see his wife, Mai, who was in a pink gown dress, and she laying on Zuko's bed asleep with bunny slipers. He goes around his bed to his closet, and takes off his robe to put on his formal firenation wear. This wear is a long robe with a fire symbol on the top and bottom with red shoes, and his crown that is in the shape of fire which he put on last. He goes down stairs and out the door to his uncle's tea shop in Ba Sing Se. 7

Uncle Iroh's tea shop 8

He sees his uncle pouring some tea still smiling as normally. "Still felling good huh uncle." Zuko says "Well of course Zuko I love the tea shop, but it still am felling bad about Aang." Iroh says with a little sarrow. "Well maybe the end of that adventure Zuko, for you always have to have hope." Iroh was wearing all green today. He felt very cheerful. He then made a 3 cups of tea. "One for Katara, One for Mai, and one for you" Zuko hen ended "Thank you Uncle" 9

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Zuko heads back to the palace. He is greeted by many people of both the fire nation and the Earth Kingdom. The cheered Zuko's name. Right when he was at the door he saw Toph next to him. Toph was short, and she is also blind, but don't let that fool you she can pack a punch, and she listens to the Earth, so don't think you can surprise attack her. She has short wild hair that goes down. "Hi Zuko oh I mean fire lord Zuko" She says smiling. "UUH hi Toph" Zuko says then goes into the palace. Toph follows Zuko in, and then she says " So how is it going?" Zuko begins to get irritated. "Okay why are you really here!!!!!" Zuko yells. "Gee z Zuko don't get so mad we are all friends here" Toph says calmly. 11

Zuko grumbles12

"Now as you know Aang is dead, and Kauko has become our friend, my wonderful husband, but he is having some visions of Aang too." Toph says. "But here's the weird part he is having visions of Aang coming back from the dead, and destroying the Earth. " 13

Zuko looks at Toph with great worry. "What did you just say?" 14

"Yea he has visions of death by Aang!" Toph replies looking a little bored. Zuko looked up. " So old Kauko huh" Zuko finishes. Toph ends with "yep!" then spits in a metal trash can, and lays down on a sofa near the door. Zuko begins to think. "It would be nice to see my friends again. Zuko ask Toph "Could you take care of Katara, and tell her I left you to help why I take care of some business okay?" Toph answers "Sure" Zuko leaves, but right behind comes Mai walking up to him. Zuko begins to notice her rubbing up against his back. He looks back and sees her blushing. "Uh Mai" Zuko replies a little blush. "Hey you didn't think your were leaving without me." she says. "Huh yea I guess come on then" Zuko says smiling. Suddenly Zuko felt Mai's soft hand put her on his then turned his face towards her then Zuko fell right to her face. They put there lips closer to each other then put pressure on each one. Then let go quickly, but softly. Toph screams "Good bye guys!!!" Mai waved bye and then they both left. 15

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Meanwhile a dust storm began in the southern water tribe. Hakoda led the water benders away from the storm. He then had Sokka build a wall made out of garbage bags. People's home were being destroyed. Sadly without Katara there wasn't much too do. They just ran, but as they moved they never noticed who was flying in the air starting the storm. All the way at the top was Aang controlling the storm, and beginning to destroy everything. Hakoda does escape, but the water tribe is destroyed. "I don't believe it dad it is over" Sokka says. Hakoda looks at the sky, and then he looks at his son with little tears, but what he did tear up about was how life was and how it is without Katara. They leave on there water tribe ships. 17

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Mai and Zuko have been walking for hours. "Were are we going too?" Mai ask. "Ba Sing Se" Zuko replies dramatically. Then Mai says "What Ba Sing Se!!!" "What for all I could guess is your uncle" "No the Earth King is Kauko now!" Zuko yells. "But how Zuko the last Earth king has no relation to him or Toph" Mai says. "Well yes see here the former Earth King had no daughter or son, so Toph took power,and she married Kauko" Zuko ends. "Yea I knew that!!" Mai ends. Zuko begins to remember one time he was in Ba Sing Se19

-Flashback20

"Fire lord Zuko you have a call from your Uncle in Ba Sing Se!" "What!!" Zuko yells knocking over a chair. "What is wrong?"Were not sure why fire lord Zuko!!" His men say. Zuko runs right out the door. He orders his men to prepare a war balloon. He waits till it is finished, but still ordering his men to hurry. He leaves the fire nation in his high flying ballon. He rides off with much pride. Sokka decided to meet Toph in Ba Sing Se. 21

Later on Zuko gets to Ba Sing Se. 22

He remembers the wall of beauty. It was like a never ending river, and it was made of clay and rock, with little water. He went up to a man at a counter and handed him a passport. He entered through the wall only to be attacked by a gang of bandits he swiftly took them out with a large fire. He then slid and kicked one only to be hit with a boulder. Zuko dodges and throws a large fire bolt. Zuko see the bolt hit him and he begins to burn. Then 4 other come at him and throw oranges as a distraction, so Zuko slips and the gang beats him, and finally a net captures him and the bandit who hit. The net came from somewhere in the air. Zuko becomes trap in the insanity. He then sees a old friend, Zhoa. Zhoa retired from fighting when Zuko became fire lord. He has this upward hair, and a red fire nation robe that was like a little head dress. "Well! Well! look who we have." he says. "It is Zuko how is it going" "Zhoa!!!" Zuko yells. "Yes thats me I hope you had a good time coming up here, because you are going to fall fire lord!!" Zhoa ends. "Err Zhoa!!!" Zuko yells. Zhoa doesn't answer him. "Men take the fire lord!" Zhoa replies. The men grab Zuko and put him down to the floor. Zuko looks at Zhoa with worried eyes, and Zhoa looks back with devilish eyes. Zhoa begins to punch Zuko!!" People begin to notice and try to call the Earth King, but Zhoa orders the gang to attack the people, but Zhoa didn't see Zuko's uncle coming, for as soon as Iroh saw his son he came after Zhoa. He runs right up on him and yells "Zhoa what are you doing here in Ba Sing Se!!" Zhoa answer"Finishing what you couldn't, I am taking over this city in the name of the fire nation, and I will burn it down" It was years ago when Iroh conquered the Earth Kingdom in the name of the king, but he failed to truly have Ba Sing Se his, and that what Zhoa was going to do, but it wouldn't belong to Zuko's uncle, Iroh, it would belong to him."23

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-End flashback-25

After Zuko finishes his flashback his already at Ba Sing Se's registration booth, but he is in front of 25 people who have passports into Ba Sing Se. "You've been quit lately Zuko" Mai says. "Yea I guess I have been just thinking" Zuko says with a little smirk. Then all of a sudden someone knocked over Mai, but luckily Zuko grabed her. "Mai!!" Zuko tempered goes up to 90. "WHO DID THAT!!!!!" he yells. "Zuko!!" Mai yells. Everyone gets freaked. "Zuko don't go starting c***p!!" Mai yells. "Oh cr*p huh!!" Zuko screams to the top of his lungs. "Your way out line!!" Mai says. "WE.." Zuko pauses when he sees his friends Sokka, Suki, and Hakoda. Sokka is very skinny, he loves meat, and he has hair that looks like Toph. "Hey Zuko, Mai!! what's up." Sokka begins. "Uh!" Zuko and Mai move away from each other and turn then say "Nothing!!" at once. "Yeaa!" Sokka says moving his head up down in a dramatic fashion why smiling. Zuko puts his head down in despair. After a moment there are next after a man with long hair finishes. The man randomly stats screaming. "What the f**K!!!!!!" he yells. 26

Chapter 2- A retreat of survival 27

"So my passport won't work!!!" he yells. "Correct sir!!" the man at the counter says. The long haired man begins to pull his hair. "No I demand the truth bi**ch!!" He yells. "It is true!!" the worker says in agony. The long haired man stops talking. Zuko then notices Mai looking at the man's biceps and strength. "UHH Mai!" Zuko says, but Mai ignores Zuko. "Man Zuko you might have some competition!!" Sokka says. "Your kidding me!" Zuko says in amazement. When the man turns around Suki and Mai become all cold inside like the white coldness of many mountains in polar regions. They get hearts in there stomach. Zuko and Sokka get a burning rage of fire in there heart. Hakoda begins to laugh. "Hey what is your name sir?" Suki says. "The name is Jongo, and also I am the son of a master fire bender his name is Jeong Jeong" Sokka gets real surprised. "Jeong Jeong!!" "You act nothing like Jeong Jeong" Sokka says. "Yea!!" Jongo replies. "So how are you Jeong Jeong's son?" Sokka replies. "I just am got a problem bub!!" "No No No don't hurt me!" Sokka says beginning to bow. The girls laugh at him. Jongo then leaves. "He is different from the old man" Zuko begins. "Oh what do you know Zuko!!" Sokka says. Zuko looks at him with heat in his belly. Sokka covers his mouth. "Next!!" the man at the counter says. Sokka comes up quickly. "Ooh that's us come on Suki" Suki runs up to Sokka. "Okay hon.." Sokka hands the man 3 passports. Hakoda lastly comes up. They man at the counter hands one too Sokka. "Huh!" "It is in valid" the man says. "What!!!!" Sokka yells. Zuko comes up with Mai and the man 2 passports. "What are you doing Zuko??" Sokka yells. "Wait!!" The man then looks at the passports and gets a surprised look. "Oh Fire lord!!" "Yes I fire lord Zuko demand 3 people" Zuko says. "OH I understand, but these are only 2..." The man says. "2 super unofficial fire lord passports which are worth 5 billion grand" Zuko counters. "What 5 billion!!"Sokka says. "Well what am I not to trust the fire lord if it is true then these 2 are worth 4 people. Sokka's eyes brighten. The man lets them through. It has been a while since he was in Ba Sing Se. 28

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Inside of Ba Sing Se it was peaceful. Earth kingdom citizens went too and fro. People going to restaurants like Rockies, Gomini, Earth men, Earthies, and The Earth, stores like joshi, Jeong, freedom earth, and more. The entertainment was perfect. Mai and Zuko looked at the couples booth as 2 lovers were kissing. It seemed so perfect there. It was a great food place too Sokka, because there he ate delicacies like crunch rockers, and jugs of fresh water that had the flavor of a water benders delicacies. 30

"OOO! look guys food!!!" Sokka yelled in a excitement. Sokka ran towards a candy merchant. "What ya got??" he asked. "Well I have a some rock plants, rocks with some plant like bio, and a goo center. "I'll buy it!!" Sokka says moving his hand. 31

Meanwhile as they were in Ba Sing Se someone was in hiding. He wore a dark cape. He had blue marks and the Avatar in signature. He moved away. When he did the began to bend some rock around, he walked away, but as he did a boomerang hit him, for it belong to Sokka, and when heb looked up he saw him next to Zuko. "Who are you?" Zuko yelled. Then the one in the dark cape water bended with no water near, and hit Zuko, and began to run, but Sokka and Zuko ran after him. yet finally he stopped. "You were spying on us for some reason, but for what reason huh bi**ch" Zuko yelled. Then the man in the cape turned to Zuko, and began blasting lots of water into it was a wave that hit Zuko and Sokka, but it was loud although fore everyone to hear, so Mai, and Suki came and kicked the man in the cape, but he countered with fire that made Suki and Mai fell with burns. Then the cape flew of and he was in the avatar state. "Impossible!!!" Zuko yells. Zuko begins throw fire bullets, but the have no effect at all. "No way!!" Sokka says surprised. "He can't be Zuko!" "I know it is a surprise!!" Zuko says. "The Avatar is back!!!!!!!!!!!" they both say. "Avatar!" Suki yells. Then the new Avatar burns out, for the Avatar was angered, and finally a big blow of air burst out, he then had fire come out of his mouth, and as he walked he breathed more fire, and even more air came out of his hand, but finally he attacked and threw Zuko and Sokka far, but wait no very far in fact he threw them son far that you only could see them with a telescope. "Sokka!!!" yelled Suki "Zuko!!" Mai yelled as she began to cry. "Ha ha ha!!!" the new Avatar yells with a dark evil voice. Then the Avatar state began to fade and a young boy fell down, but he was hurt. Then Zuko came down in on a burning cloud. "Ya ooh!!!" they yell as they begin to blow a gush of heat. Suki sees them after they explode, and runs after them. Zuko stands up with his pride in tact, and he begins to look up at the new Avatar's face to notice a resemblance in Aang, and guess what he see's it. This Avatar is bald and but a child yet he causes a large heep of trouble. Ba Sing Se citizens began noticing the Avatar laying there. Mai picks up the Avatar, and a bright light shines over her as she looks at his body she can't help, but cry as her tears hit his chest which was black and dark it gets in his skin and his lungs start pushing up and a faint low heart beat begins, and he begins to awake. His lips gettting closer to Mai's then the faint beat gets louder and the child screams. Zuko then runs with Sokka and Suki quikly towards Mai, but when the get there they see Mai on the floor bleeding. Zuko picks her up then hugs her yelling her name. Sokka looks at the Avatar with anger, and determination to save everyone. Sokka takes out a sword then runs to the boy then boy grabs Sokka by the neck, his eyes red and dark with a black inside, he squeezes the neck with blood gushing out, and bam Sokka falls. The boy lets him go. Suki sees every thing and runs right up to this werid Avatar and gets the life sucked out of her, and she dies. Hakoda begins but instead he runs to a large ocean then makes the Avatar throw fire balls, and jumped in the ocean allowing the boy to look in and get punched in the face by Hakoda. Then he escaped but threw a tree trapping the Avatar for now, but it didn't hold, and finally Hakoda was capture. It was a retreat of survival now, because Hakaoda couldn't win he had to retreat and hope for survival as his predator began to eat him alive through a net. Then a lighting bolt hit the net, but it was Azula and Kauko, Earth King and to be lighting King, next to Azula. "Move now Hakoda I will care for your son and friends. Hakoda nodded a ran away. Kauko got in position with the lighting towards the Avatar along side was Azula. The boy was clumsy now he then got up into a bad stands. Kauko did then looked into his eyes, for they were eyes that needed help. Kauko hoped he could retreat from this and survive. Now he was at a crossroad of him on. Should he attack his enemy or should he help this Avatar32

Chapter 3- The dark and the light33

Kauko droped his lighting and bowed down, but Azula never noticed and began shooting the Avatar. The new Avatar dodged the attack then began a plea in weird languages. "Ku Shan No Hakoda, nor shall Azu rain supreme, and Dark.34

Avatar gone so su besha Aang new imavatar" Azula punched him after, but her energy got sucked out. Then after laying her down the new Avatar was attacked by someone who looked like him, but his skin was brighter and he shined like the whole world was lightened by a god. The light was only a boy, but as Sokka and Zuko observed they noticed the looked similar, but one shined why the other stayed in the dark. The 2 boys smiled at each other. They began talking in the same language, but after the talk they attack each other, for in translation the replied this "Darkness shall rule over the Earth, and cloud the light, and you good Avatar will fall, but we will rise." one says. "No darkness you will fall by me the true Avatar!!!" the other says. " My son will rise and renew this world as a hero" they both say. They get in battle position and collide. the darker Avatar uses fire and the other uses air. The collision course begins to make a great explosion of mass chaos, for mountains were falling, cities were burning, and the whole world began to crumble. ' Stop!!!!!!" Sokka yelled. The good Avatar looked at Sokka with wishful eyes. Then the darkness blew a large wave of darkness. Then the good Avatar made a wall of Earth stopping the bending. He began to talk to the darkness through the wall. In translation he said this35

"WE must stop this isn't right if were to save the Earth then we must work together, fore we are the Avatar, we are one person, and we must team up to protect this Earth. The darkness looked away. "I am one with you, but I can not join you for I am a part from you" the darkness says. "But I will not fight you it is for the sake of the Earth" "I will return, but for now were like the Koi.36

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  • The first paragraph is slightly droning in a way... it just goes on about something. Add a bit of action in that first paragraph to liven it up a bit!