aaaaawwwwww he loves you!!!

coming home from work1

exhausted and worked out2

just wanting to shower and sleep3

you walk into your bathroom4

to find rose peddles all over your 5

bathroom floor 6

candles surround your tub7

hot water already ready for you8

your wondering who or how9

then you realize10

aawwwwwwww  11

He loves you!!!!12

Author notes

#2 "God Bless Everyone"
This isn't true for me, but maybe someday it will happen
hope you enjoy this poem, you can even daydream that it's your special someone!! lol Kat

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  • Shougo
    July 16, 2005
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    Good

    i liked this. short simple romantic. i'll give it my last applaud for the day since this is the forth piece i've read.