Soul Channeler's tale

Hello I am Soul Channeler of the Akatsuki. My mom is Noioka and my dad is Kaisake and my older brother is Mayuri. My real name is forgotten like my mind. It happen when a shock affected me by seeing rouge ninjas killing my parents and older brother. I still have a picture of them with me and I was 5 when I became No Tail Bao and killed the rouge ninjas with 1 blow.

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  • Angel07
    October 30
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    So sad but good. A good set up if you wish to continue the story.
    Keep it up
    Angel


  • Yuki-sama
    May 9
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    ..... Poor Soul Channeler .....