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Masks. So many people use one. Weather it is being used in theater to hide a face or to hide emotion. I wonder, can anybody see behind mine? Can anybody see the pain i so often feel? Does anyone know my emotion?23
The only time i can take of my mask is when i am alone.My past mistakes haunt me. The only one i can talk to besides my friends is my mom who doesn't even understand me sometimes. My friends understand me. they except me not for what i look like, my likes and dislikes, but for who i am.45
When i am done worrying about my past, both my mistakes and the mistakes of others that have affected mylife, maybe then i will be able to look forward to my future.6
was it an okay poem?
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I enjoyed that a lot! You are very talented when it comes to writing, and the subject that you based this poem upon is something that I think that we can probably all relate to. I agree with you entirely when you said in this poem that we all are wearing a mask. And i also like how the words are like hidden in a way and you can only read them if you highlight over them. Is that also suppose to be like, the words have a mask too or something? Anyway, it is really good all together. Keep up the good work!
~Lullaby.x
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Can't...read it...
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I am not sure it was 'poetry', although I really liked it. It expressed a lot of thoughts in one 'poem' Pretty good!
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