Chewed out your eyes,
feasted upon lies.
Stomachs full to the brim.
parasites tear you apart,
limb by limb.
Lips quiver,
shoulders shiver,
sinful words, your mouth they fill.
One more word,
and sinners, they kill.
Author notes
i wasn't really in the right frame of mind when i wrote this, and i'm guessing it showed. hopefully you'll find some liking to it.
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This poem tells a truth that toomany people see these days. It creates a powerfull image
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You know what I liked? The imagery. I didn't quite understand the meaning to it, but the almost gruesome quality to this makes it great. I like how the words make the poem kind of bounce, and yet it's describing all of the somber things...
It's a really cool effect.
So great job!
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