Our relationship was going very well. In other peoples eyes we were perfect. In our eyes, we had some problems, i guess it was because we spend so much time together. We were like a married couple. Happy 95 percent of the time and the other 5 percent fighting. But we always found a way to work it out. Until one night.....1
He came over just like any other Friday night. We were watching a movie. Then i got a text from one of my friends, my ex, his best friend. He got really upset with me and started going through my phone. I tried to take it from him but he just pushed me away. I guess he got jelous. He started yelling and going off about me texting other guys. He threw my phone across the room and said "Its over!" 2
He left me home alone crying in the dark. I needed someone to talk to, but my phone was broke and the only number i had memorized was his. I thought it was true love that would last forever...but it took 1 text, just one night, to mess everything up.3
Love Hurts.
Did this pull you in and leave you wanting more?
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Great story. It was sad, but interesting, and definitely well-written.
Good job overall, and welcome to the website.
Kevan (Greeter) -
This is a beautiful but sad story. But who knows, maybe it will work out one day?
Love has it's very unusual way of coming around when you need it to.
I didn't see many errors in it. Although, I'd change "Happy 95 percent" to "We were happy 95 percent" just because it flows a little better. That's only my suggestion though. Great writing and I hope to see more from you soon.
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