It happened one foggy ,gray evening at a poorly lit Drive-in

Sorry wrong restroom...1

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An epic story of mystery and suspense!!!

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  • Yemassee gold member
    July 12, 2005
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    Oh my, I've never done that fortunatelt. I used to work in a restaurant a few years back and had to wash the women's fathroom floors at night...that is as close as I've come.


  • SEA angel
    July 12, 2005
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    Five star***** Triple A+++

    Okay, this had suspense, plot and motive. Not to mention many of us can relate. Motive? Oh, excuse me... I think I've been watching too many court and cop shows.

    Bad comment, bad comment
    Whatcha gonna do
    Whatcha gonna do
    When your comments sound like COPS too

    Now, if you haven't ever heard entry to COPS TV show you will be like this: What?

    Good luck in contest.
    Edited on Jul 12, 6:49 because ''.


  • July 11, 2005
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    LOL, you're great.

  • M.A.King
    July 11, 2005
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    Cute, very cute. In fact really super-d-duper cute. I like the metaphors and detailed description. Brilliant word choice. I nearly didn't make it to end but....wow, glad I hung in there.