Even1
Stars 2
Abandon3
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you know when you're lonely and everything else seems to be abandoning you?
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Those three words opens the door to many meanings..well done..take care~
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oh wow this poem can be interpreted in so many different ways and leave so much to the readers imagination
creative, simple, unique....this is amazing stuff!!
well done
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Ah, a very prophetic entry! IT says so much and can be read to mean many different things! Yeah, I really like this entry, thanks!
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teeheehee- Dr. Phil should worry about getting a makeover, not telling other ppl how to fix their lives. lol.
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Talk about concise! Wow. You have chosen three AMAZING words. This is jam-packed with meaning (and pleasantly easy to read, I might add!). The brevity just adds to the poignence (is that a word?) and the general mood of solitude and sadness... Beautiful, Marie! I love how the word "stars" can be interpreted so many different ways. Wonderful job! Hmmm... I may check this contest out... It looks like a good one! Toodles, huggles, and awesome write!!!
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Yes, I know
Yes, I do. Dr. Phil says we are only lonely if we are not there for ourself. I try to remember that and then my best friend is always with me. SELF MATTERS includes you and me.
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