A line of Love

This girl never knew what this trip could bring, but she traveled for hours. She finally was to this new place where she will soon start school, make new friends, settle in. Her house was not ready so why her parents lived in a hotel she lived with her sister because she was afraid of what people would think of her if they found out. So for a good two weeks she was with her sister. She didn't know what to expect next. Well, her family got their house and moved everything in. The girl didn't like her room. She had dark brown panel and bright red carpet. She thought it was ugly. Her sister took her shopping for posters and stuff to make her room temporarily better. Even though her room was still ugly the girl stuck it through. She unpacked everything. Still her first night at her house she decided to stay at her sisters once again. After a week the girl was still scared because she didn't see any girls. She seen all guys, and she was scared of school and you cannot imagine what was going through her mind. 1

Well 2 weeks in she still hadn't met anyone but she liked her house.2

Her dog had puppy's. She was excited about that. School came. She was proud that she had straight A's going to a new school. Well she waited the three days and when she got to school it was scary to her. Everyone asked her millions of questions and she was afraid she wouldn't fit in. Wow everything was different then what she had used to. First day was strange. She met so many people. She couldn't remember all the names or the things she had to do, but she still made it through. A week went by she started realizing who liked her and who didn't. A boy in one of her classes who she never ever thought anything of tried being Mr. big shot and showed off. Well that girl put him in his place. See the funny thing is, ever since that day she had a crush on him. She waited a while to tell him. Then actually she didn't! Her friend did. 3

She never really thought about it. But she was so happy to have someone! After all this time she finally had a really good friend. She thought she could trust him! He was perfect in her eyes! But she felt used and hurt after she found out he was with another girl! She didn't know what to do. She stayed with him. Him and the other girl were through. She felt something with him she had never felt before. So she stayed. As days past they got closer. She knew all about him. She was so happy, and felt so good. School started back up. Different schools. Everything was good for about 2 months then they wouldn't stop arguing. That's all they did was argue. So they broke up and got back together a few times. Her friends always had her back. They didn't like him because he started cheating badly and would lie like crazy and just didn't want to see the girl hurt. 4

Her friends all kept trying to show her that she didn't need him and that she deserves better but again and again she didn't listen so again and again she got hurt. She kept running back to his sorry butt. He always talked her into it. After she finally realized all of these, she tried to move on. She tried for a month to get this boy she truly liked. Finally she got him. He wasn't exactly what she thought he was. He was somewhat better but also somewhat worse. He was caring and funny, but he ditched her to play video games and he would get mad about things so easily and things just got old. I mean she liked him a lot but she wanted better. One day her and her ex boyfriend were hanging out and they were getting close. He kissed her and she kissed him back and he was being all over her for the night. Well she didn't want to lose her boyfriend but she didn't want to keep it from him.5

So she told him and of course she lost him. She was so depressed and just upset. She cried for hours at a time. And to top it off they didn't talk for a month. So she tried getting her act together but she still missed him. After they started talking again it still hurt her when he called her a liar, and a cheater because she didn't plan it to happen, but maybe if he would care about her more then video games things would probably be different. So they went on as friends. Then her best friend started liking him again. She had no problem.Yeah she was hurt but worked through it. They started dating. Yeah she wasn't happy about it but she was happy for them. One night she was talking to him and wanted to let everything out so she did. Any questions she had on her mind she let out. She got one answer she didn't expect but she was happy. She had been forgiven and was happy. He may not never trust her but he forgave her. 6

Well still best friends with the first crush, he leaves the state. She was crushed because he left when he could of had her but didn't want her. She tried  to call him everyday but he won't answer. She really  got mad one day and said forget it. Well now she seen her second crush having harsh times. She tried her best to help him, cheer him up, make him feel wanted, be the friend she was. She felt ever since then she has been closer to him. She talked to him more and more. She really wished for a second chance, right about now because he wont leave her mind. 7

This is her second love. She knows it for sure8

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  • ImJustALostMemory
    August 27, 2005
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    lol its okay i was just wondering thanks for the comments!!
    <3
    JiGgLeZ


  • I Am My Own God
    August 27, 2005
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    lol, srry, it is an awsome story. greast write


  • I Am My Own God
    August 27, 2005
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    this is awsome. it is sooo good. plz keep writing like this

  • ImJustALostMemory
    August 27, 2005
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    your welcome lol! may i ask why u commented me saying thank you and stuff on this story? and then said nothing about it
    ? you dont have to comment this now i was just curious lol
    <3
    JiGgLeZ


  • I Am My Own God
    August 27, 2005
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    thanx on ur comment on laughing, me. i worked hard on it. thank u

  • ImJustALostMemory
    July 11, 2005
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    Hey thank ya so much!


  • ForgottenxMe
    July 11, 2005
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    this is just sooooooooooo sweet. its not over the top, but i understand xactly what your trying to say. great poen
    ~nerny

  • ImJustALostMemory
    July 11, 2005
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    hey i get it now mr j! hehe!! i feel dumb o well!!

  • ImJustALostMemory
    July 11, 2005
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    hey thanks for the comment.. i didnt want to much action because its true and i didnt want it to lie but thanks again for your comment!

  • ImJustALostMemory
    July 11, 2005
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    do what? u have me lost mr j!

  • ArSeNaLrOx13
    July 11, 2005
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    its a true story u just cant add stuff like and then he whipped out hif gun and shot the guy it dont work like that

  • thepoisonpen
    July 11, 2005
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    lovely

    aw so simple and adorable! but ya needa make mor action sweetie!!lol

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