Bang, bang, Mummy!1
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the sort of things that you write amaze me, i never new that anyone could think like that, i mean i dont even know what that is......
so did bang bang mummmy have some sort of conection to how you feel, your inner feelings, or did you just decide to write that one day, some sort of random thing?
anyway short and sweet is good in my book even if i dont get it -
Short but sweet... i think?
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I need 2 more comments till I can write stuff again.. yup very good poem travis..My life has new meaning lol I copied that off ..I think it was ur comment..or sum other..personz NEWAY..
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I didn't say the words!
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why did you shoot grandpa?
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Bunnies are our friends
Hmmm... Would some bunny explain this to me please. My thoughts are multiplying like bunnies trying to get an easter basket handle on this one. Oh my, and no bunny icon either.
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A mystery story
... I love murder mysteries
Good luck in the contest ..
Dee
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mummy? I don't know. I'm missing something am I? A spoiled rich English kid?
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Ah, maybe. But look at the last word, who would say that?
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"Bang, bang, mummy?" lol. I can only imagin what that means and what it is that might have been done! I fear it may be a murderers last words before shooting a gun...
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