Wonderland..*Chapter 0, Characters and Profiles*

(Well, first of all, like i said on my profile, I make stories based on me and my friend Taylor's RPs. Tomi and Relix belong to her, and Yume belongs to me)(Me and Taylor are in it too, but we don't have a cool enough backround for bios XD We're too normal T_T, so our personality's will be revealed in the RP ^-^..But in the story, Me, Taylor, Tomi, Relix, are friends in the story. They didn't meet Yume..yet.)1

Oh- and by the way, if you steal any of these characters, YOU WILL F**KING DIE. KBYE. =D (really, don't steal them.)2

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Name- Hitomi 'Tomi' Shadowalker (not her maiden name) 4

Age- She APPEARS to be around 19.... 5

Looks- http://ayatoujou.deviantart.com/art/Tomi-to-darkangel10028-1062027136

Eye Color- Blue/green =37

Personality- Tomi has a very unique personalitly, unique varrying from good and bad. Around people she does not know she's extremelly shy and it's hard to get her to talk to strangers because of her past. But, when you get to know her and gain her trust, she has a great sense of humor(slightly dark and sexual XD), determined to make people's day better, and sarcastic at the same time8

Luurrrverr- Relix Shadowalker, her husband~ But they being called "boy friend and girl friend" because it sounds cooler. 9

History- Summary- Tomi was a normal new baby born at first, with loving parents and an average home. That's until the great deamon Varden was captured, and after thousands of failed attempts of finding a human vessle for the demon, they finally found Tomi. Forcefully, they put the demon inside her. Up onto she was 3, she lived a pretty happy life. Until, however, a VERY evil man heard about Tomi and her powers and sent 200 men to capture her. and to see if her powers where real. So, to do that, they brutally beat her father in front of her and shot her mother. This got Tomi pissed off, so Varden took over. After she lost concincess- because a 3 yearold's body can only last for that long under that amount of pressure- only 14 men survived. She was brought back to the mens' boss, and was put under cruel and brutal experiments and illegal Sparten fights. She adventually broke out when she was 12. She lived with Toren, Relix, and Relix's twin brother who visted from time to time XD 10

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Name: Yume (You-May)12

Age: 17 13

Looks: (I don't have a scanner T_T I drew her and everything but, this is the CLOSEST to what she looks like. Picture her with curly black hair, some rows of curls white, and silver eyes) http://media.photobucket.com/image/anime%20black%20hat%20rose/Wonderland_of_stars/Anime/Female/Female/goth-2.jpg?o=314

Personality: Is very shy, serious, and "proper" when you first meet her. When you get to know her, she has a very, VERY fun personality and loves to make people happy and smile.15

History: Yume grew up a very happy life in 'Wonderland'. She lived there as a creation of imagination of humans, just like everyone else who was there. Wonderland, is pretty much that. It's not just a little girl falling down a rabbit hole's mind- it's every single person's bright imagination into one. So you could say, she's imaginary..but not really. It's basically just a different universe created by humans. She was a dancer, singer, and all around entertainer, at a place where everyone would just come to celebrate and have fun. She used to have a smile that lit up her town..used to. That all disapeared one day..(Reveals what happened in the story =3) Her name means 'Dream' in japanese.16

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Name: Relix Shadowalker 18

Age: 19 *20 tomorrow*19

Looks: Relix has dark silver hair with gold eyes, his pupils are slit. (No picture, IMAGINE IT YOU LAZY PEOPLE.)20

Personality: Very shy around people he doesn't know, along with people that he does know. he has a habbiat of stuttering and blushing a lot.21

History- To make things short- Relix was a child born into a very highranking Grim Reaper clan and, unlike his brother Neron, he did not like killing for no good reason. Soon, at the age of 5, he was kicked out by his father, being sent to the Human World. If this wasn't bad enough, he shortened his son's life, making him live only until he age of 16 Forcing him to either kill a human for their life force or die. Soon, he was pacing the city when he heard someone sobbing. He went to the side of a wide building where a large room was, the wall was made out of complete glass. There, was 4 year old Tomi, sobbing her eyes out. He promised her that he would save her and become her 'Prince (he was reading stories back in the Shadow World)' Soon, at the age of 10, he and Toren finally broke her out of the lab22

Annd..thats it! Please tell me what you think of our characters ^_^ And check out Taylor's Profile! Her name is D4YDR34M4DD1CT23

(How we look in the story24

Kayla (me): http://media.photobucket.com/image/brown%20hair%20anime%20girl/chadni98/anime%20girls/smile.jpg?o=109 (picture me with green eyes)25

Taylor: http://i388.photobucket.com/albums/oo321/AquaTheHedgehog/l_8595b0773094ee2954d59003450c2ca6.jpg

Well? What do you think? X3 Once again, me and Taylor love our characters very much..please do not steal them TT_TT

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  • WritersEffigy gold member
    April 30
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    Although very interesting all three ideas need some editing (at least in the way they're written grammatically) and you might want to choose a background that doesn't hurt they eyes so much.

    I'm sure the more you write the more detail will come out about your characters.

    Keep on writing!

    -Effigy (Greeter)

    • =D thanks! And, i took these bios we made from a website me and Taylor joined a while back, never really spellchecked ^_^'

      And Taylor said that too, i'll change the backround XD

      ~Picture of me and Taylor supposedly in anime added, picture us that way :3~