The gist of discussions heard in the stairwell.1
" up them stairs"2
" no!no! I'd be in the way"3
" you are in the way, up them stairs."4
" Mother wouldn't like it."5
" Mother's not going to get it, up them stairs"6
" No No I'm in the family way."7
" You're in everybodies way, up them stairs"8
" I won't go."9
" I'll get the whip."10
" No, no, anything but the whip."11
" Anything?"12
" Yes, anything."13
" Like I said in the first place, up them stairs."14
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It ain't really like this.
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Hopefully not. Lol.
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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No, just a part of a spoof thing I remembered from way back when.
It didn't work well as I seem to have forgotten some of it.
Many thanks for visiting.
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What was this supposed to exactly be about? I would have found it funny, but the girl seemed to be so...distressed.
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The girl is not distressed. This is just a bit of a play on words and is not meant to to taken seriously or literally.
I shall have to be careful what I post, won't I?
Thanks for your input and comment, made me think a bit.
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