Next day at school, Jenny realized there was a new boy there. He had brown short hair that wasn't combed very well but enough. He wore a white and brown striped shirt with jeans on. He came up to talk to her. Apparently he has seen her play soccer and wanted to hang out with her sometime.........1
Jenny really liked the idea of going out, for she had always wanted a boyfriend. For the next two weeks, Derik and Jenny went out to restraunts, movies, and over to eachother's houses. 2
After a few weeks with him, Jenny really started getting bored with him. He was too rich and gave her anything she wanted, and she really didn't like that much. 3
(still working on this.... I'll get there on Monday though!)4
What did you think? Please comment!
Comments
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I would.lol. i would love it. but anyway. i like it so far. you give us enough. you know this is like a summary of the hole chapter, instead of a lond thing. thats cool. great job
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good!
good... i like the details! nicly discribed!
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Edited on Jul 09, 10:40 p.m. because 'the rose'.


