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  • SEA angel
    July 12, 2005
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    Help me back up please. Thank you.

    I have fallen and I can't get up. I've lost my wings and here I be. Let's help each other so we both can rise back up to heaven one day.

  • Luthien Luinwe
    July 11, 2005
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    Good

    Thanks for the comments guys! I'm glad that someone actually reads my stuff. lol! Pozo's right, it's not really a story but I guess it could be a plot line for one, right?

  • pozo
    July 10, 2005
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    I don't think it's a story, but this was a great write which I liked a lot Keep writing, I like how the lines were used here
    Thanks for your comment,
    All the best,
    Pozo

  • -PyroPixiStix-
    July 10, 2005
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    I love it. The other entries for the contest were so silly... but that is absolutely lovely. ^_^


  • Yemassee gold member
    July 9, 2005
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    I like how you positioned the words to look like they are falling. Yes, I guess we are all fallen angels, according to some. Me? I just create silly contests and try not to think too hard.

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