Poem a wrote I ago months four
Say cannot I it about more
When it reading was I
Crying began friends my
“End the at come must rhyming your!”
Author notes
Is this clever or just stupid?
A contest entry
- I desire some limericks! by Violette.
145 points, ended May 3, 14 entries
Honorable mention
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hahahaahahaha! I love it! Really nice job.
Heh, it even sounds hilarious when read aloud. *grins*
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I just came across your "limmerick!"
You asked if it was clever or stupid. Well...I thought it was VERY clever...and most original. (Understand, this holds no sway nor connection with the contest...just my own opinion!) But...VERY good! (It's rare to come upon something original! Good for you, Q.
GA
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A limerick Yoda must write, hmm?
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! I can not stop laughing; this is GENIUS! Oh my goodness, my sides are splitting! Seriously the funniest thing I've seen in a long while. Very very amusing!
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Clever and creative, but I doubt it's a limerick. They usually have a rhythmic flow to go with them. A very interesting exercise anyway. Well done.
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Read it enough times and you'll get a rhythm... you just have to pretend you don't speak English.
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That's the hard part, I do speak English, and to make it worse, Australian English. One of the multitude of types in our world. I'll give it another go.
You are right, it does have a rhythm. Would hate to have too many like that just the same.
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haha
okay that was creative, work nice!
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