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to Ty, my love23
who no longer cries45
to torchure a being 67
before it dies89
to stab one's heart 1011
and rip out their eyes1213
to be lost 1415
and never found1617
to feel like floating 1819
and come crashing down2021
to bad nightmares2223
that have no comfort2425
to be homeless2627
no shoes or shirt2829
to be left out3031
the one picked last3233
to fail a test3435
or flunk a class3637
to lose a loved one 3839
so young in age4041
to be lost in love4243
and have it taken away4445
to be in pain without a cure4647
to kept alive by machines4849
wanting to live no more5051
to be an angel5253
for you Ty, tears pour5455
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That was really good! I loved the flow and the rhyming. Great job.
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it is good
good job.
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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This is really beautiful
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This was really beautiful
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Ty is fake, you are stupid for even liking him (Emile)
I guess you just need to turn to one of your other 10 man whore ugly girl-liking bfs now, huh? (Raf) -
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That's a really dumb thing to say, even if you don't think he was real. Honestly, you need to learn how to prove a point more than with insults. And that end bit is just plain fucking stupid, how do you know if she's ugly or whatnot? For all you know, she could be the most incredible person alive.
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That is so rude and not funny. She just lost someone she loved, and you are being an insensitive jerk. If you don't have something nice to say, then don't say anything at all.
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