i was laying in the grass1
looking at the sky2
wind blowing through my hair3
sunlight in my eyes4
i saw a big white cloud5
the cloud had wings6
i thought it was ty protecting me7
that thought, so much joy it brings8
hes gone and in a better place9
but hes always in my heart10
watching over from above me11
we will never be apart12
i will be with him someday13
but not for a while14
ill be in his arms again15
for he brought me so many smiles16
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A contest entry
- Poems on reuniting with a lost love by trekkergirl.
100 points, ended May 30, 18 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Ugh I want to cry!
I didn't know Ty but everyone seems to love him a lot
and it makes me think of what he was like.
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I like this reference to the white wings. There was a single misspelling that I just happened to notice... you wrote ty and I think it was either trying or try. Anyway, nothing that can't be fixed for the next contest you enter this into. Thanks for sharing this with us an thanks for entering it into my contest.
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well written...and stay strong... he won't leave us....
*Blessed Be*
Lauren
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Stay strong, Kay.
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