The Rooster Crows

The rooster crows in the early dawn1

Welcomes the coming of the morn2

Tomorrow, If I have my way3

He will be roast of the day4

No more to wake me at break of dawn

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  • Violette silver member
    April 25
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    Great sense of humor

    But this didn't quite follow the limerick ruling beat- sorry.


    • rbruce silver member
      April 25
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      You are right, it doesn't, does it. Too many syllables.