Aussie Limerick

There was a young man from Australia1

Who painted his rear like a dahlia2

The colours were true3

The reds, white and blue4

But the perfume, dear me, what a failure.

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  • xD That's hilarious! The "dear me" just gave it a cutesy flip. Thanks for the laugh, and the limerick! Well done, and congrats on the gold!


    • rbruce silver member
      May 8
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      I love the limericks, but it is hard to keep them clean. There are so many that are only fit for the back shed. Thanks for your visit and comment, I appreciate it.

  • Quank
    April 26

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    I love limericks. I love this limerick. Also, I had to look up "Dahlia", and therefore learned something as well! Bravo!

    • rbruce silver member
      April 26
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      Limericks, so easy to read, simple rhythm and style, and so hard to get just right. Thank you for your kind remarks, I appreciate them.


  • Violette silver member
    April 25
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    Haha

    Ok great! That really made me laugh-well done!


    • rbruce silver member
      April 25
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      Many thanks Violette, one out of two. I'll have to think of another.

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